Smartphone Addiction
Although smartphones may be convenient and an easy tool to find information, they can provide inaccurate information and can be extremely dangerous to a teen’s health. Smartphones are not only an extreme health concern but they can also lead to many other problems. Some of these include being damaging to relationships, addictive, and causing panicked feelings. Most people have watched a teen race around rapidly trying to find their phone, getting more and more panicked by the minute. They soon become stressed out and desperate to find their phone. The connection a teen has to their device very easily becomes an addiction, and may seem to be an item they couldn’t live without. Many American teens have a smartphone addiction, which could end up being a huge problem for them.
Many American teens spend an extensive amount of time on their smartphones. According to Pew Research Center “92% of teens report going online daily — including 24% who say they go online ‘almost constantly’.” That means that the majority of teens are spending time on the internet every day, and a large amount of them are almost constantly on their phones. When teens are on their phones so much, it causes them to feel panicked without it. Huffington Post reports “If in some catastrophic event they were to lose their device, 73 percent of people admit they would feel ‘panicked’ while another 14 percent would feel ‘desperate’.” This is getting to be a serious problem for teens. It is such a big issue that there has been a word created for it: nomophobia. Nomophobia, the fear of being out of mobile phone contact, is a serious problem.
Often, teens who have a phone addiction are perceived as rude. Huffington Post stated “When at a meal with someone else, 30 percent of participants say they check their phones.” If a teen checks their phone while eating dinner with another person, they’re probably not giving the person their eating with their full attention. They might not make eye contact, or could give very basic one word answers that show no deep thought or emotion. The person the teen is eating with may feel like the teen doesn’t care much about the conversation. This could appear to be rude, and lead to losing friends and other people they care about.
Not only does smart phone usage affect how others view teens, but it can also affect their health. According to TeenSafe “researchers discovered that people who use cell phones for a mere half an hour every day for ten years double their risk for brain cancer.” Considering many teens use their cell phones for much more time than that, this is very dangerous. If teens don’t stop this soon cancer could become very common and cause even more problems than it already is. The health of teens who use smartphones is definitely at risk.
Some people might argue that smartphones are a valuable and convenient tool for teens to find information. A teen could easily type a question right into a search engine on their phone and get an answer almost instantly. Rather than going through all the trouble of asking a teacher or looking something up in a book, they have an enormous amount of information at their fingertips. Also if a teen were to need information on a topic currently happening, they would be able to find much more recent information on the internet than in a book. This is because books need to go through a long process before they are published, while it is relatively easy to put something on the internet. While all of this is true, using a phone to get information could be risky. The first reason is that when teens use their phone to get information, they’re probably looking up things on the internet. There is a lot of false information on the internet making it hard to tell what is reliable and what isn’t. This could lead to major confusion, and a lower grade if it’s used for a school project. Another reason it’s risky is that if someone is completely relying on their phone for information, they would have some major issues if their phone were to die, break, or get lost. While using a smartphone to find information has its benefits, a safer route would be to use a book or ask a teacher.
When it comes to smartphone usage, the less the better. Although there are benefits like its convenience and ability to find information quickly, it’s not worth the risks. Too much smartphone usage could cause serious health risks and ruin relationships with friends, family, and other important people. Although completely giving up on smartphones might seem drastic and unnecessary, just limiting the time spent on a smartphone could help. American teens are better off using their smartphones as little as possible.
You bring up some good points here, and I don’t think it is solely a problem for teens. I feel like I see many adults in their 20’s, 30’s and even 40’s who are succumbing to this cell phone addiction. Aside from the health risks and anxieties, the lack of social interaction is a really big issue. Do you have any ideas on how to get everyone to put down their phones? Do you think teens would respond to any sort of mindfulness or meditation interventions (if it was built into the school day) to help them “be in the moment” and not constantly on their phones? It’s a really tough issue and a difficult addiction for many to “break.”
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I agree that many adults have a smartphone addiction that could be just as bad, and i originally planed on writing about the addiction for all ages. I decided not to do this because I felt that i would be able to support my data more if i made it specifically teens because i have experience with that since i am a teen who uses their smart phone a lot. Thanks for the comment!
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My husband would absolutely agree with you, but he is most concerned about how much time I spend on my phone at home. I have to say, he’s right. I check social media, and I’m attached to email. This is mostly a pressure that I put on myself. Often the emails I receive or the notifications I receive from the students in the online class that I teach (in my mind) need immediate attention. I feel like the person on the other end has an expectation of me to respond right away, so I have also chosen to live with that thought in mind. Your post really made me think about my priorities. It’s difficult, but I have to set up boundaries with my personal time, so I can focus on home and family and my cats and all the other things that make me smile outside of my work life. Next goal: put down the iPhone.
I wonder about the brain research. I see students using cell phones all day. However, it is extremely rare that a student is actually using the phone to talk. In the past, I can see that the brain issue could be a big concern, but I wonder what the most recent studies say for the generation that rarely communicates by putting a phone to their ears. What are your thoughts on that?
Cell phones and addiction were actually topics that we talked about at our last faculty meeting. We shared some articles and had discussion about how to handle cell phones in the classroom while still understanding the anxiety it causes for some students to feel detached. What would you suggest as a good way to balance this considering that the reality is that students will always use phones until the next thing comes along.
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You bring up a good point by saying that many people do not actually put their phones up to their ears. I´m not sure if that affects the research but its definitely worth questioning. I´m glad my post made you think about how often you are on your phone. Thanks for the comment!
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Your overall article is very informative and interesting to read. There was a surplus of logos used throughout, mainly demonstrated by using quotes. While this is a good technique, try adding pathos or emotion to your writing to really win over your readers. Great article! Kendall M -OHS
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Thanks for the comment!
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I agree with you article because you go into to good detail in formatting it. You used good use of using logos and appealing to your audiences emotions. Which is a very good thing to do if your audience is toward someone else who also agree with the addiction.
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Thanks for the comment!
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Your article was really good! You had good use of both pathos and logos! I also felt that your transitions were strong throughout. The facts and statistics you gave throughout the article made it very reliable. Good job!
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Thanks for the comment! I liked your article too 🙂
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Your article was very informative and written very well. You used a lot of logos in your essay with facts, quotes, and statistics which was very good, but you might want to add some pathos or ethos in there to show the readers your emotions towards this topic. I just wanted to point out that you used the contraction “couldn’t”. An essay is a formal piece of writing, so to make this word more formal just say “could not”. Trust me I did the same thing a bunch of times. Overall good job and I really liked your essay it really got me thinking on how much I use my phone and how I should probably not use it as much.
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Thanks for the comment! Thanks for pointing out my use of the word couldn’t, I didn’t even realize i did it. I’m glad my essay made you think about how often you use your phone. Thanks!
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Your article was extremely well done. You used transitions very well. Your use of statistics certainly helped your claim and put into perspective how serious the issue of smartphone addiction really is. All of your points were well connected and got the reader’s attention. The way you presented your counter-argument was good in that it showed how you could see the other side, however there are more negatives to the addiction than positives. Overall, the article was great and thought provoking.
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You included great evidence that directly related to your arguments and efficiently explained them. Overall, the essay was great, but if you wanted to edit it in any way, you could switch up the sentence variety or word choice. This would spice up your writing and make it more interesting for the reader. I agree that this topic should not only be limited to teenagers, but anyone with a smart phone in general. Good job!
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I agree with your thoughtful commenters about your effective use of hyperlinks and sources to support your claims. I also agree that a personal connection or story might have appeal to the pathos more strongly. However, overall this was a thoughtful piece and definitely not one that I believe the majority of teens would argue. Good job for tackling that perspective and doing it justice! ~Mrs. C
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You had a really strong thesis and your closing paragraph summed it up well without being too repetitive, however a lot of words were over used and repeated too often.
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Your essay was very well written, and your use of factual evidence and ethos was very good. While this side of your essay was very good, more use of pathos and emotion would have been beneficial.
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I agree with your argument. Teens today are very attached to their phones. Instead of living life, we’re watching it from behind a screen. I often find myself desperate to find my phone if I lose it. If I break my phone I find my days are ruined until I can buy another. Phone addiction is definitely a growing problem in society today. I liked the points you made and the facts you brought into your argument.
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This really interested me and I liked reading this because I know that this is true for me, I hate being without my phone. But reading about what it can cause and what can happen makes me want to put up my device and try the optional ways.This was really well written and has a great message.
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